Road Kamelot | D Gray Man

She is the first child of Noah who able to control Noah's Ark. She acts like normal teen, but sometimes in signs of sadism. Pretty enough Road, just like Road in anime.
hmmm, in my opinion Laki should make her skin darker for this chara, just like darker Road:D nice make up for her eyes :)

Sora | Kingdom Heart II

"A scattered dream that's like a far-off memory. A far-off memory that's like a scattered dream. I want to line the pieces up... yours and mine." Sora in the beginning of Kingdom Hearts II

this pale background makes dreamy effect(floating window), I like it.
For costume, i can't see his zipper, this outfit should not in white combination but silver. too light color tone for Sora outfit. not really done.^^

Vampire Sora's sprite | Kingdom Hearts II

no need to looks real, her hair in amazingly heavy-handed mode and nice make up, wew!
but where his clawed fingers(?)
and for the suits, rather than white, preferably shaded white. his clothing was completely black/dark...and the last comment is..
some space between objek and background would be better for deepest result. increase your skills..